Imaginary Landscape, San Jose, CA
Whiskey, wine and your writing are similar in that they do better after aging. Letting your words rest for a bit might quite possibly cause improvement. I’m not sure why it happens, but it is a mystery I have encountered again and again. Waiting a bit allows you to read and see the your writing through fresh eyes. New avenues for development might open up and what you have already committed to could be discarded.
Take a critical look at what you have created and try to find connections among the random thoughts. What makes sense? Strive to assemble some coherent themes and thoughts from what you have written about the experience and significance of the photographs. Keep thinking and writing. If you discover new and better ideas write them down. Don’t forget to use lines to separate the new and old ideas.
Begin organizing the thoughts into a story about the photographs. The goal of your story will be to lead the viewers up to the edge of the photograph. Then, the viewers can fall into the photographic experience you created. This is what you want to share with your viewers. Write this down. It does not have to be long, expressive or wonderful. What it has to be is complete. You can’t edit anything if it isn’t complete. Call it the first draft.
Let the first draft marinate for a week. You may then commence revisions to create drafts two through six. It is quite permissible to have days pass between drafts. Send draft six to a very good friend along with the photographs. This is a very important part of creating an Artist’s statement; selection of a person that can look at your photographs and your words and tell you honestly when you have missed the mark. It’s even better if they can tell you how far you have missed and why you missed the mark. You have reached nirvana when they can make suggestions to improve the statement.
What to do with this critique is important. When you get the critique back, read it. Think about it and let it age while your bruised ego gets better.